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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which sentence option should I choose?

1. The Order of the Skull was the clerical branch of the Dark Knights, and consisted of individuals who wielded both weapons and divine magic when they entered battle.

2. The Order of the Skull was the clerical branch of the Dark Knights, consisting of individuals who wielded both weapons and divine magic when they entered battle.
  

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Your choice. But if you go with #1, ditch the comma (no new subject ).

  • Your choice.
  • But if you go with #1, ditch the comma (no new subject ).
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Your choice. But if you go with #1, ditch the comma (no new subjectEmotion: wink).
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Thanks a lot, which one do you prefer?

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