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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
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Which sentence option is better?
Which sentence sounds better and should be the one i use?
1.) A massive army of bakali, the reptilian race once thought to had been cleansed from the world, was discovered to be the cause of the stories of mysterious invaders that had first reached the empire during the reign of Ackal IV.
2.) The mysterious invaders who had caused stories to first reach the empire during the reign of Ackal IV were discovered to be bakali, the reptilian race once thought to had been cleansed from the world.
1.) A massive army of bakali, the reptilian race once thought to had been cleansed from the world, was discovered to be the cause of the stories of mysterious invaders that had first reached the empire during the reign of Ackal IV.
2.) The mysterious invaders who had caused stories to first reach the empire during the reign of Ackal IV were discovered to be bakali, the reptilian race once thought to had been cleansed from the world.
Top answer
1. once thought to have been cleansed... [ With this change, it is the sentence I would choose ]
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- once thought to have been cleansed...
- [ With this change, it is the sentence I would choose ]
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1. ...once thought to have been cleansed... [ With this change, it is the sentence I would choose ]
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