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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which sentence option is a better choice?
FYI- Eldako is part of the group and Gloomwing is the dragon.
1. Once the group reached Neron, Gloomwing immediately ambushed them, and Eldako acted as bait to lure the dragon to his death by a band of cha'asii elves, although he also was presumably killed.
2. Once they reached Neron, the group was immediately ambushed by Gloomwing, and Eldako acted as bait to lure the dragon to his death by a band of cha'asii elves, although he also was presumably killed.
1. Once the group reached Neron, Gloomwing immediately ambushed them, and Eldako acted as bait to lure the dragon to his death by a band of cha'asii elves, although he also was presumably killed.
2. Once they reached Neron, the group was immediately ambushed by Gloomwing, and Eldako acted as bait to lure the dragon to his death by a band of cha'asii elves, although he also was presumably killed.
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