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Anonymous Posted 3 years ago
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Which sentence makes more sense.

I have 2 versions of a sentence, but not sure which one sounds better, or makes more sense.

a) I'm a Junior Security member for the British Army. I'm currently doing my quota.

b) Am a Junior Security for the British army and am doing my quota.

  

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anonymous which one sounds better a) But I'd change even that one a little: I'm a Junior Security member for the British Army, and I'm currently doing my quota. CJ

— CalifJim

  • anonymous which one sounds better a) But I'd change even that one a little: I'm a Junior Security member for the British Army, and I'm currently doing my quota.
  • CJ
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anonymouswhich one sounds better

a)

But I'd change even that one a little:

I'm a Junior Security member for the British Army, and I'm currently doing my quota.

CJ

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anonymousJunior Security member

The meaning of this is unclear. You should explain it.

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