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Samsoner2 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Which sentence is the best?
I am talking about my previous work experience in a letter. The sentence that I'm having trouble with is immediately right after my introduction.
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At _company name__, I demonstrated that I could be a reliable employee by consistently meeting deadlines, handling multiple assignments and becoming skilled at a variety of clerical tasks.
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At _company name__, I demonstrated my reliability to the organization by consistently meeting deadlines, handling multiple assignments and learning quickly on the job.
#1
At _company name__, I demonstrated that I could be a reliable employee by consistently meeting deadlines, handling multiple assignments and becoming skilled at a variety of clerical tasks.
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At _company name__, I demonstrated my reliability to the organization by consistently meeting deadlines, handling multiple assignments and learning quickly on the job.
Top answer
samsoner2 At company name_ , I demonstrated that I could be a reliable employee by consistently meeting deadlines, handling multiple assignments , and becoming skilled at a variety of tasks . Of the two, I'd use this one, omitting 'clerical'. (Everybody says they're a quick learner.
- samsoner2 At company name_ , I demonstrated that I could be a reliable employee by consistently meeting deadlines, handling multiple assignments , and becoming skilled at a variety of tasks .
- Of the two, I'd use this one, omitting 'clerical'.
- (Everybody says they're a quick learner.
- ) CJ
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samsoner2At company name_, I demonstrated that I could be a reliable employee by consistently meeting deadlines, handling multiple assignments, and becoming skilled at a variety of tasks.Of the two, I'd use this one, omitting 'clerical'. (Everybody says they're a quick learner. It's almost a cliché.)
CJ
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