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Kedra Posted 20 years ago
Vocabulary

Which sentence is more suitable? Thanks!

I am composing a Thank you page text for our web site. The idea is to not simply let a visitor go after he sends the feedback via email form, but also suggest some other links to visit. I have two variants. The sentence I am not sure about is marked in green. If you have better than these two, I will appreciate if you share your opinion:

1) Thank you for your message!

Your email has successfully been sent. Please allow us 1 or 2 business days to get back to you.

Are you sure you’ve seen all you need on our web site?

Check out a few links.....

2) Thank you for your message!

Your email has successfully been sent to us. Please allow us 1 or 2 business days to get back to you.


Are you sure that you're ready to leave our site?
Check out a few links.....

Thank you in advance!
  

Top answer

' Check out these links...

  • ' Check out these links...
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2 Answers
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I'd phrase it in a more positive way

'Would you like to see some more of our site?'

Check out these links...
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Thank you for prompt reply and your suggestion!

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