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Karaca Posted 6 years ago
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Which sentence is more correct ?

Hi,

I want to make a sentence about the issue that I tried to express in two different sentences below. However , but I guess I couldn't get it right. Can you help me?

"Also, in the presence of strabismus, photoscreeners could often not able to obtain a refractive data and have low accuracy rates. This is another factor limiting the clinical use of photoscreeners.”"

"Also, the failure to obtain a refractive data and low accuracy rates in the presence of strabismus is another factor limiting the clinical use of photoscreeners"

  

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I suggest this. n addition , the failure to obtain refractive data and low accuracy rates in the presence of strabismus is another factor limiting the clinical use of photoscreeners.

  • I suggest this.
  • n addition , the failure to obtain refractive data and low accuracy rates in the presence of strabismus is another factor limiting the clinical use of photoscreeners.
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I suggest this.

n addition, the failure to obtain refractive data and low accuracy rates in the presence of strabismus is another factor limiting the clinical use of photoscreeners.

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