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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Which sentence is grammatically sound?

After installation of wall padding work in first 3 chalets, we noticed that we have shortage of blue fabric for next 3 chalets. Please arrange to order the shortage quantity as per the details below.

After completion of wall padding work in first 3 chalets, we noticed that there is shortage of blue fabric for installation of wall padding in next 3 chalets. Please arrange to order the shortage quantity as per the details below.

  

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I am not happy with either. For one, you are leaving out the articles. Perhaps: After we completed installing wall padding in the first three chalets, we noticed that we did not have enough blue fabric to install padding in the next three.

  • I am not happy with either.
  • For one, you are leaving out the articles.
  • Perhaps: After we completed installing wall padding in the first three chalets, we noticed that we did not have enough blue fabric to install padding in the next three.
  • Please order enough material to complete the work according to the information given below.
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I am not happy with either. For one, you are leaving out the articles. Perhaps:

After we completed installing wall padding in the first three chalets, we noticed that we did not have enough blue fabric to install padding in the next three. Please order enough material to complete the work according to the information given below.

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