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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
Grammar

Which sentence is grammatically correct and natural?

The diameter of the stem bolt should be precisely as 12 mm to fit the existing female threaded socket, 2 or 3 mm difference in the height is not an issue.

The diameter of the stem bolt should be precisely 12 mm to fit the existing female threaded socket , 2 or 3 mm difference in the height is not an issue.

  

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anonymous The diameter of the stem bolt should be precisely as 12 mm to fit the existing female threaded socket, 2 or 3 mm difference in the height is not an issue. The diameter of the stem bolt should be precisely 12 mm to fit the existing female threaded socket , 2 or 3 mm difference in the height is not an issue. No "as".

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  • anonymous The diameter of the stem bolt should be precisely as 12 mm to fit the existing female threaded socket, 2 or 3 mm difference in the height is not an issue.
  • The diameter of the stem bolt should be precisely 12 mm to fit the existing female threaded socket , 2 or 3 mm difference in the height is not an issue.
  • No "as".
  • There are other problems.
  • The diameter of the stem bolt should be precisely 12 mm to fit the existing female threaded socket.
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anonymous

The diameter of the stem bolt should be precisely as 12 mm to fit the existing female threaded socket, 2 or 3 mm difference in the height is not an issue.

The diameter of the stem bolt should

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Hi

The 'as' is not wanted there, so the second one is right.

If you use noun plus verb, then noun plus verb in a sentence and put in a comma instead of a conjunction, that is known as a comma splice. It's not necessarily wrong (I'm sure I do it myself), but some people would say so. You could think about replacing the comma with a semicolon or full stop.

Hope this helps

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Here is the corrected sentence.

The diameter of the stem bolt should be precisely as 12 mm to fit the existing female threaded socket. 2 or 3 mm difference in the height is not an issue.

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