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Anonymous Posted 5 years ago
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Which sentence is grammatically correct and more natural?

According to the supplier, if we fold the oriental rug, the additional fringes attached to the rug may get damaged, They advised us to roll the rug for shipping, not fold it.

According to the supplier, we roll the oriental rug for shipping; otherwise, the additional fringes attached to the rug may get damaged if we fold it.

  

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anonymous Which sentence is grammatically correct and more natural? They are about the same. If I had to choose, I would choose the second one.

  • anonymous Which sentence is grammatically correct and more natural?
  • They are about the same.
  • If I had to choose, I would choose the second one.
  • I would phrase it a little more concisely as follows: According to the supplier, the oriental rug should be rolled, not folded; otherwise, the fringes can get damaged.
  • CJ
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anonymous Which sentence is grammatically correct and more natural?

They are about the same. If I had to choose, I would choose the second one.

I would phrase it a little more concisely as follows:

According to the supplier, the oriental rug should be rolled, not folded; otherwise, the fringes can get damaged.

CJ

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