Which sentence is grammatically correct and more natural?
We noticed that all wrought iron chairs delivered were rusted and the coating has cracked and peeled off in some places.
Upon inspection, the wrought iron chairs supplied were found to be damaged: rusted and the coating has cracked and peeled off in some places.
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This version is error-free and more natural. All of the wrought-iron chairs delivered were rusted. In addition, the coating had cracked and peeled off in some places.
- This version is error-free and more natural.
- All of the wrought-iron chairs delivered were rusted.
- In addition, the coating had cracked and peeled off in some places.
- We noticed is a weak phrase.
- It suggests that you were not doing a careful inspection and even that you don't care very much.
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This version is error-free and more natural.
All of the wrought-iron chairs delivered were rusted. In addition, the coating had cracked and peeled off in some places.
We noticed is a weak phrase. It suggests that you were not doing a careful inspection and even that you don't care very much.
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