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Anonymous Posted 8 years ago
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Which sentence is grammatically correct?

one of our staff, Nathan, whose name was not listed in our gate pass. Please add him in our list as he has to involve in final setup work at the project hand over.

one of our staff, Nathan, his name was not listed in our gate pass. Please add him in our list as he has to involve in final setup work at the project hand over.

  

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You need to reword a bit. eg A member of our staff, Nathan Smith, was not listed in our gate pass. Please add him as he needs to be involved in final setup work at the project hand-over.

  • You need to reword a bit.
  • eg A member of our staff, Nathan Smith, was not listed in our gate pass.
  • Please add him as he needs to be involved in final setup work at the project hand-over.
  • Clive
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You need to reword a bit.

eg A member of our staff, Nathan Smith, was not listed in our gate pass. Please add him as he needs to be involved in final setup work at the project hand-over.

Clive

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