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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Which sentence is grammatically correct?
Please find attached the image of electrical cable run along in the ceiling for your reference. This has been forwarded to you at the instruction of MEP Consultant.
As instructed by the MEP consultant, we have attached the image of electrical cables run along in the ceiling for your reference.
As instructed by the MEP consultant, we have attached the image of electrical cables run along in the ceiling for your reference.
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The second is better. However, I would make a couple of changes for clarity: As instructed by the MEP consultant, we have attached the image of the electrical cables that run along in the ceiling, which you may use as a reference.
- The second is better.
- However, I would make a couple of changes for clarity: As instructed by the MEP consultant, we have attached the image of the electrical cables that run along in the ceiling, which you may use as a reference.
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The second is better. However, I would make a couple of changes for clarity:
As instructed by the MEP consultant, we have attached the image of the electrical cables that run along in the ceiling, which you may use as a reference.
As instructed by the MEP consultant, we have attached the image of the electrical cables that run along in the ceiling, which you may use as a reference.
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Here are a few more comments.
i would say ''photo', not 'image', if that is what you mean.
In my experience, consultants do not instruct. They suggest. Your boss instructs.
I'd omit 'which you may use as a reference'.
i would say ''photo', not 'image', if that is what you mean.
In my experience, consultants do not instruct. They suggest. Your boss instructs.
I'd omit 'which you may use as a reference'.
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