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Anonymous Posted 9 years ago
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Which sentence is correct/better

"The power of football brought us together (praise be to Arsenal), but it's the power of friendship that kept us together."

"The power of football brought us together (praise be to Arsenal), but the power of friendship kept us together."

  

Top answer

Both are OK. #2 is more elegant.

— Clive

  • Both are OK.
  • #2 is more elegant.
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2 Answers
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Both are OK.

#2 is more elegant.

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For some reason, my impression of the sentences is the reverse of Clive's. I rather like the highlighting of "power of friendship" in that cleft construction.

CJ

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