The first sentence is worse than the second. The second sentence does not seem entirely correct though. For one thing, I don't really understand the reason for "but".
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AnonymousThe booking is to be less transit time or early connection as per attached detailsI don't understand this. I don't know whether AS's interpretation is correct or not.
GPYAS's interpretation is correct or not.I made an educated guess.
Anonymousshort transit time"transit time" is unclear.