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Anonymous Posted 13 years ago
Grammar
Which sentence is correct?
The dust particles, bubbles & rough edges were noticed in the lacquer finished top.
The dust particles, bubbles & rough edges were noticed on the lacquer finished top.
The dust particles, bubbles & rough edges were noticed on the lacquer finished top.
Top answer
The dust particles, bubbles and rough edges were noticed in the lacquer finished lacquer top.
- The dust particles, bubbles and rough edges were noticed in the lacquer finished lacquer top.
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The dust particles, bubbles and rough edges were noticed in the lacquer finished lacquer top.
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I think there is a difference between "finished lacquer top" and "lacquer-finished top" (which I would hyphenate).
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In and on are both OK. I think I prefer 'on'.
The dust . . . The word 'the' suggest that these particles etc. have been already mentioned before this sentence. If not, remove 'the'.
Say 'and', not '&'.
The dust . . . The word 'the' suggest that these particles etc. have been already mentioned before this sentence. If not, remove 'the'.
Say 'and', not '&'.
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But the bubbles certainly would be in the lacquer due to sloppy application.
.And also the dust particles, if the lacquer was cured in a kiln that was not scrupulously cleaned. .
.And also the dust particles, if the lacquer was cured in a kiln that was not scrupulously cleaned. .
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