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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
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Which sentence is correct ?
As per the site discussion , the following items were removed and received at our stores from the above project. As per the site discussion, we received the following items at our stores which were removed from the above project
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Hi, As per the site discussion , the following items were removed and received at our stores from the above project. As per the site discussion, we received the following items at our stores which were removed from the above project As per the site discussion, the following items were removed from the above project and received at our stores. Clive
- Hi, As per the site discussion , the following items were removed and received at our stores from the above project.
- As per the site discussion, we received the following items at our stores which were removed from the above project As per the site discussion, the following items were removed from the above project and received at our stores.
- Clive
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Hi,
As per the site discussion , the following items were removed and received at our stores from the above project. As per the site discussion, we received the following items at our stores which were removed from the above project
As per the site discussion, the following items were removed from the above project and received at our stores.
Clive
As per the site discussion , the following items were removed and received at our stores from the above project. As per the site discussion, we received the following items at our stores which were removed from the above project
As per the site discussion, the following items were removed from the above project and received at our stores.
Clive
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Can I write as follows
As per the site discussion, M/S xxxxx removed the following items which installed themselves in the above project and handed over to us.
As per the site discussion, the following items were removed from the above project by M/S Company who fixed, and received at our stores.
As per the site discussion, the following items were removed by M/s xxxx
As per the site discussion, M/S xxxxx removed the following items which installed themselves in the above project and handed over to us.
As per the site discussion, the following items were removed from the above project by M/S Company who fixed, and received at our stores.
As per the site discussion, the following items were removed by M/s xxxx
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Is it correct?
As per the site discussion, the subcontarctor removed the following items which had been installed by themselves in the above project and handed over to our stores.
As per the site discussion, the subcontarctor removed the following items which had been installed by themselves in the above project and handed over to our stores.
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Hi,
Is it correct? No.
As per the site discussion, the subcontarctor removed the following items which had been installed by themselves in the above project and handed over to our stores.
As per the site discussion, the subcontractor removed the following items which they had installed as part of the above project, and handed them over to our stores.
Is it correct? No.
As per the site discussion, the subcontarctor removed the following items which had been installed by themselves in the above project and handed over to our stores.
As per the site discussion, the subcontractor removed the following items which they had installed as part of the above project, and handed them over to our stores.
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Two observations:
1. If you are saying "the following" you should end with a colon and then list the items.
2. Sometimes one sentence tries to do too much work. You are approaching the point when too many ideas are trying to be expressed.
1. If you are saying "the following" you should end with a colon and then list the items.
2. Sometimes one sentence tries to do too much work. You are approaching the point when too many ideas are trying to be expressed.
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