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Anonymous Posted 20 years ago
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Which sentence is correct?

Hi,

Please look over the two sentences below and tell me whether they are correct.

The lesson will start with each student writing his or her assignment on the paper while the teacher making corrections as he goes around the classroom.

The lesson will start with each student writing his or her assignment on the papaer while the teacher is making corrections as he goes around the classroom.
  

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The lesson will start with each student writing his or her assignment on the paper while the teacher is making corrections as he goes around the classroom. That sentence is perfect!

  • The lesson will start with each student writing his or her assignment on the paper while the teacher is making corrections as he goes around the classroom.
  • That sentence is perfect!
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The lesson will start with each student writing his or her assignment on the paper while the teacher is making corrections as he goes around the classroom.

That sentence is perfect!
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As the first activity of the lesson the students will write an assignment while the teacher goes around the room making corrections.

writing on paperseems a bit redundant.

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