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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Which sentence is better/well-constructed?
"My best friend is a commitment phobe and I've had her tell me time and again that just the thought of being tied down makes her shudder."
"My best friend is a commitment phobe and she has told me time and again that just the thought of being tied down makes her shudder."
"My best friend is a commitment phobe and she has told me time and again that just the thought of being tied down makes her shudder."
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Anonymous Which sentence is better/well-constructed? the second one "is a commitment phobe" isn't good at all, though. Try "has a phobia about commitment".
- Anonymous Which sentence is better/well-constructed?
- the second one "is a commitment phobe" isn't good at all, though.
- Try "has a phobia about commitment".
- CJ
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Anonymous Which sentence is better/well-constructed?the second one
"is a commitment phobe" isn't good at all, though. Try "has a phobia about commitment".
CJ
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