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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
Letter Writing
Which sentence is better suitef for formal writing?
"Initially, I was disappointed, but after a while, I resigned myself to the fact that I will never be proficient in Math, and this resignation has greatly helped me discover myself."
"Initially, I was disappointed, but after a while, I resigned myself to the fact that I will never be proficient in Math, which has greatly helped me discover myself."
"Initially, I was disappointed, but after a while, I resigned myself to the fact that I will never be proficient in Math, which has greatly helped me discover myself."
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There are too many commas, and 'math' is not capitalized (but 'math' is informal for 'mathematics' anyway). Try to restructure your sentence with fewer commas.
- There are too many commas, and 'math' is not capitalized (but 'math' is informal for 'mathematics' anyway).
- Try to restructure your sentence with fewer commas.
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There are too many commas, and 'math' is not capitalized (but 'math' is informal for 'mathematics' anyway). Try to restructure your sentence with fewer commas.
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