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Anonymous Posted 17 years ago
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Which sentence for resume sounds better/correct?
interested in some input, i am working on a resume and wondering which sentence for the summary is better... Thanks!!!!!!!!
Does the first sentence make sense or is the second option better?
"Committed to providing excellent client service and work product."
"Committed to providing an excellent work product and client service."
Does the first sentence make sense or is the second option better?
"Committed to providing excellent client service and work product."
"Committed to providing an excellent work product and client service."
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Is this sort of a company’s mission statement? Or a slogan? Just based on the sheer sounding effect, I think without the “an” is what I would use.
- Is this sort of a company’s mission statement?
- Or a slogan?
- Just based on the sheer sounding effect, I think without the “an” is what I would use.
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Is this sort of a company’s mission statement? Or a slogan?
Just based on the sheer sounding effect, I think without the “an” is what I would use.
Just based on the sheer sounding effect, I think without the “an” is what I would use.
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This is just the last sentence of the summary section of a resume. I agree the first sentence is what I originally wrote but when I say it out loud it seems odd...
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Try ... an excellent work product and outstanding customer service.
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