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Anonymous Posted 16 years ago
Essay & Composition Writing
Which paragraph should I place in order to make my essay sounds better?
A. Ever since I was a child, I was always inspired by famous people on television, the feelings of one day to be famous, just like them. But to me now, I would not call that an inspiration, because it is more like envy. To me, an inspiration should come from deep inside your heart, from your genuine interests.
B. Inspiration is an endless cycle that has its effects on the whole world. Everyone is inspired or influenced by other human beings at least in some ways. No matter how big or small the inspiration is, or how positive or negative it is, everyone has the feeling of being inspired. Inspiration can exist in many different forms, in an idea for example, or perhaps even in a song, but my source of inspiration came from Dr. Martin Luther King
B. Inspiration is an endless cycle that has its effects on the whole world. Everyone is inspired or influenced by other human beings at least in some ways. No matter how big or small the inspiration is, or how positive or negative it is, everyone has the feeling of being inspired. Inspiration can exist in many different forms, in an idea for example, or perhaps even in a song, but my source of inspiration came from Dr. Martin Luther King
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It is difficult to advise you about which paragraph would be best placed in the context of an entire paper without seeing the entire paper. I don't know what your overall point is because I don't see the introduction. I don't see what precedes or follows the paragraph.
- It is difficult to advise you about which paragraph would be best placed in the context of an entire paper without seeing the entire paper.
- I don't know what your overall point is because I don't see the introduction.
- I don't see what precedes or follows the paragraph.
- Can you include more?
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It is difficult to advise you about which paragraph would be best placed in the context of an entire paper without seeing the entire paper. I don't know what your overall point is because I don't see the introduction. I don't see what precedes or follows the paragraph. Can you include more?
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