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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Which paragraph is better/idiomatic?

"I have learned a lot from my failure. I will never regret it because it taught me to stand on my own two feet, to fight for my rights, and above all, it made my family realize how important it was for me to do for what I wanted to do."

"I have learned a lot from my failure. I will never regret it because this failure taught me to stand on my feet, it taught me to fight for my rights, and it also made my family realize how important it was for me to do what I wanted to do. "
  

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I have a slight preference for this one, but it has a minor error. "I have learned a lot from my failure. "

  • I have a slight preference for this one, but it has a minor error.
  • "I have learned a lot from my failure.
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I have a slight preference for this one, but it has a minor error.

"I have learned a lot from my failure. I will never regret it because it taught me to stand on my own two feet, to fight for my rights, and above all, it made my family realize how important it was for me to do for what I wanted to do."

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