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Anonymous Posted 10 years ago
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Which or that

This section discusses the range of strengths and limitations of the experiment and discusses a range of improvements that (which) could improve the reliability of results.

Help appreciated. Thanks.
  

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Both are OK. Personally I prefer "that". The "discusses the range ...

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  • Both are OK.
  • Personally I prefer "that".
  • The "discusses the range ...
  • and discusses a range" repetition is noticeable and is not great stylistically.
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Both are OK. Personally I prefer "that".

The "discusses the range ... and discusses a range" repetition is noticeable and is not great stylistically.
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Thank you for replying!!

Is this sentence better?

This section examines a range of strengths and limitations of the experiment and discusses improvements that could improve the reliability of results should this experiment be repeated in the future.
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AnonymousThis section examines a range of strengths and limitations of the experiment and discusses improvements that could improve the reliability of results should this experiment be repeated in the future.
I think "examines the strengths and limitations" should suffice. I'm not sure you need "range".

"improvements that could improve" is repetitious
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This section examines the strengths and limitations of the experiment, and discusses how the reliability of the results may be improved should this experiment be repeated in the future.

i think this is best? What do you think? Thanks!
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AnonymousThis section examines the strengths and limitations of the experiment, and discusses how the reliability of the results may be improved should this experiment be repeated in the future.
Yes, this one is OK.
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