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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Which options are better choices for sentence structure?

1. Iyesta, worried for their safety, visited her neighbor, Stenndunuus, an aggressive and untrustworthy blue dragon who appeared to be building an army. Linsha, believing that nothing would happen to either dragon, agreed.

2. Worried for their safety, Iyesta visited her neighbor, Stenndunuus, an aggressive and untrustworthy blue dragon who appeared to be building an army.Believing that nothing would happen to either dragon, Linsha agreed.
  

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#2: it has half the commas.

  • #2: it has half the commas.
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#2: it has half the commas.

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