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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which option sounds better?
1. Palin successfully passed his Test and was granted the White Robes, which put his father’s worries at ease.
2. Palin successfully passed his Test and was granted the White Robes, putting his father’s worries at ease.
2. Palin successfully passed his Test and was granted the White Robes, putting his father’s worries at ease.
Top answer
I would use the second, just so it doesn't sound like the robes put the father's worries at ease to rest .
- I would use the second, just so it doesn't sound like the robes put the father's worries at ease to rest .
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I would use the second, just so it doesn't sound like the robes put the father's worries at ease to rest.
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