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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Which option should I use?

1. Since her forces lacked supplies, Mina could not afford a prolonged siege and planned to directly assault the heavily-fortified city.

2. Mina could not afford a prolonged siege, since her forces lacked supplies, so she planned to directly assault the heavily-fortified city.
  

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I prefer #2. No comma after "siege," though.

  • I prefer #2.
  • No comma after "siege," though.
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I prefer #2. No comma after "siege," though.

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