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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which option is correct?

1. Throughout the Age of Mortals, Kang showed that he trusted the Legion and became a worthy, if inscrutable, ally in the Legion and Solamnic Knighthood’s war against the Dark Knights.

2. Throughout the Age of Mortals, Kang showed that he trusted the Legion and became a worthy, if inscrutable, ally in the Legion's and Solamnic Knighthood’s war against the Dark Knights.
  

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The second is my choice of the two. Others would prefer the first. ally in the war of the Legion and Solamnic Knighthood against the Dark Knights.

  • The second is my choice of the two.
  • Others would prefer the first.
  • ally in the war of the Legion and Solamnic Knighthood against the Dark Knights.
  • It eliminates the question of possessive apostrophes, and I think it reads better.
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The second is my choice of the two. Others would prefer the first. My suggestion: ...ally in the war of the Legion and Solamnic Knighthood against the Dark Knights. It eliminates the question of possessive apostrophes, and I think it reads better.

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