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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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1. As the comrades fought their way through the battling forces towards the orc leaders, Drizzt forced Bruenor to choose the fate of the land: war or peace with the orcs. Bruenor made his decision by leaping atop the weakened Obould to launch himself at Grguch.

2. As the comrades fought their way through the battling forces towards the orc leaders, Drizzt forced Bruenor to choose the fate of the land: war or peace with the orcs. This decision resulted in Bruenor leaping atop the weakened Obould to launch himself at Grguch.
  

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1. As the comrades fought their way through the battling forces towards the orc leaders, Drizzt forced Bruenor to choose the fate of the land: war or peace with the orcs. Bruenor made his decision by leaping atop the weakened Obould to launch himself at Grguch.

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  • As the comrades fought their way through the battling forces towards the orc leaders, Drizzt forced Bruenor to choose the fate of the land: war or peace with the orcs.
  • Bruenor made his decision by leaping atop the weakened Obould to launch himself at Grguch.
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1. As the comrades fought their way through the battling forces towards the orc leaders, Drizzt forced Bruenor to choose the fate of the land: war or peace with the orcs. Bruenor made his decision by leaping atop the weakened Obould to launch himself at Grguch.

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