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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Which option is better? And is it clear that the "him" is Derek?

1. Derek was enraged that Lord Gunthar Uth Wistan, a fellow Knight of the Rose, never sent reinforcements to assist in the castle’s defense, which started him down the path of insanity.

2.Derek was enraged that fellow Knight of the Rose, Lord Gunthar Uth Wistan, never sent reinforcements to assist in the castle’s defense, which started him down the path of insanity.
  

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cboutin3 Which option is better? They are equally good. cboutin3 And is it clear that the "him" is Derek?

— Mister Micawber

  • cboutin3 Which option is better?
  • They are equally good.
  • cboutin3 And is it clear that the "him" is Derek?
  • No, not at all.
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cboutin3Which option is better?
They are equally good.
cboutin3And is it clear that the "him" is Derek?
No, not at all.
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