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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Which option is better and clearer? Malystryx is the red dragon.

1. From 413 AC to 416 AC, Beryllinthranox’s search for magic continued unabated, until she was requested to aid Malystryx with the other overlords in the red dragon’s ascension to a form of godhood.

2. From 413 AC to 416 AC, Beryllinthranox’s search for magic continued unabated, until she and the other overlords were requested to aid Malystryx in the red dragon’s ascension to a form of godhood.
  

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From 413 to 416 AC, Beryllinthranox’s search for magic continued unabated until she and the other overlords were requested to aid Malystryx in the red dragon’s ascension to godhood.

  • From 413 to 416 AC, Beryllinthranox’s search for magic continued unabated until she and the other overlords were requested to aid Malystryx in the red dragon’s ascension to godhood.
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From 413 to 416 AC, Beryllinthranox’s search for magic continued unabated until she and the other overlords were requested to aid Malystryx in the red dragon’s ascension to godhood.

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