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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
Grammar

Which option is better?

1. Tika was a relatively unskilled warrior, but she was courageous, affectionate, kindhearted, and had a fiery temper.

2. Tika was affectionate and kindhearted, and although she was a relatively unskilled warrior, she was courageous and had a fiery temper.
  

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Hi The second definitely works better for me. If you are going to put adjectives (or adjective phrases) together, it's good to break them into groups of two or three Dave

  • Hi The second definitely works better for me.
  • If you are going to put adjectives (or adjective phrases) together, it's good to break them into groups of two or three Dave
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Hi

The second definitely works better for me. If you are going to put adjectives (or adjective phrases) together, it's good to break them into groups of two or three

Dave

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