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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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1. When Jeggred and Danifae returned to the ship of chaos, Pharaun used his newfound connection with the ship to guide the party to the Abyss, with the help of Aliisza being the main factor in their success. The ship of chaos was destroyed upon the group’s arrival, but they were then/still able to journey to Lolth’s domain, only to find that it was in ruins and the Spider Queen was gone.

2. When Jeggred and Danifae returned to the ship of chaos, Pharaun used his newfound connection with the ship to guide the party to the Abyss, with the help of Aliisza being the main factor in their success. Although the ship of chaos was destroyed upon the group’s arrival, they were then/still able to journey to Lolth’s domain, only to find that it was in ruins and the Spider Queen was gone.
  

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When Jeggred and Danifae returned to the ship of chaos, Pharaun used his newfound connection with the ship to guide the party to the Abyss, with the help of Aliisza the key to their success. The ship was destroyed upon the group’s arrival, but they still journeyed to Lolth’s domain, only to find it in ruins and the Spider Queen gone.

  • When Jeggred and Danifae returned to the ship of chaos, Pharaun used his newfound connection with the ship to guide the party to the Abyss, with the help of Aliisza the key to their success.
  • The ship was destroyed upon the group’s arrival, but they still journeyed to Lolth’s domain, only to find it in ruins and the Spider Queen gone.
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When Jeggred and Danifae returned to the ship of chaos, Pharaun used his newfound connection with the ship to guide the party to the Abyss, with the help of Aliisza the key to their success. The ship was destroyed upon the group’s arrival, but they still journeyed to Lolth’s domain, only to find it in ruins and the Spider Queen gone.

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