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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Which option is better?

1. While the warriors of the Ice Folk battled the enemy garrison, Tasslehoff and the group confronted and defeated the dragon orb’s guardian, the Dragon Highlord Feal-Thas; however, not before his wolf minions killed Aran and Brian.

2. While the warriors of the Ice Folk battled the enemy garrison, Tasslehoff and the group confronted and defeated the dragon orb’s guardian, the Dragon Highlord Feal-Thas, but not before his wolf minions killed Aran and Brian.
  

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#2. Should 'orb' have a capital? Have you considered making the plot of your story a bit more complicated?

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#2.
Should 'orb' have a capital?

Have you considered making the plot of your story a bit more complicated?

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