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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Which option is better?

1. After establishing the military order, Vinas became the first Lord Knight of the Rose and the first Grand Master of the Knighthood.

2. Once he established the military order, Vinas became the first Lord Knight of the Rose and the first Grand Master of the Knighthood.
  

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1. After establishing the military order, Vinas became the first Lord Knight of the Rose and the first Grand Master of the Knighthood. 2.

— Cboutin3

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  • After establishing the military order, Vinas became the first Lord Knight of the Rose and the first Grand Master of the Knighthood.
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  • Once he established the military order, Vinas became the first Lord Knight of the Rose and the first Grand Master of the Knighthood.
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1. After establishing the military order, Vinas became the first Lord Knight of the Rose and the first Grand Master of the Knighthood.

2. Once he established the military order, Vinas became the first Lord Knight of the Rose and the first Grand Master of the Knighthood.
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You can take either one. I prefer #1.
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Do not start double-posting, cboutin, or we will have to limit your privileges here. Double-posting wastes our time.
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I didn't mean to double post, the first time I entered my question it said error so I didn't think it posted. I'm sorry and will definitely not double post.
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cboutin3I didn't mean to double post, the first time I entered my question it said error so I didn't think it posted. I'm sorry and will definitely not double post.
Ah, I see. That error message occurs when you hit 'post' twice in quick succession, so you might have clicked 'post' twice without noticing. I don't know whether that is a bug, or just a mechanic
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