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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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The ghost of Pradian then came to Cathan and urged him to wear the Crown of Power, but the young warrior instead convinced Pradian to awaken Beldinas. When the imperial army (subsequently) attacked Govinna (soon after), Beldinas shattered the main gates and allowed the Istaran soldiers to enter the city.
  

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The ghost of Pradian then came to Cathan and urged him to don/wield the Crown of Power, but the young warrior instead convinced Pradian to awaken Beldinas. When the imperial army attacked Govinna, Beldinas shattered the main gates and allowed the Istaran soldiers to enter the city.

  • The ghost of Pradian then came to Cathan and urged him to don/wield the Crown of Power, but the young warrior instead convinced Pradian to awaken Beldinas.
  • When the imperial army attacked Govinna, Beldinas shattered the main gates and allowed the Istaran soldiers to enter the city.
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The ghost of Pradian then came to Cathan and urged him to don/wield the Crown of Power, but the young warrior instead convinced Pradian to awaken Beldinas. When the imperial army attacked Govinna, Beldinas shattered the main gates and allowed the Istaran soldiers to enter the city.

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