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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which option is a better choice for this sentence?

1. Feal-Thas was eventually defeated when a group of adventurers, which included some of the Heroes of the Lance, entered Icewall Castle in an effort to acquire his dragon orb as part of the scheme that the highlords had engineered.

2. Feal-Thas was eventually defeated when a group of adventurers, including some of the Heroes of the Lance, entered Icewall Castle in an effort to acquire his dragon orb as part of the scheme that the highlords had engineered.
  

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cboutin3 1. Feal-Thas was eventually defeated when a group of adventurers, which included some of the Heroes of the Lance, entered Icewall Castle in an effort to acquire his dragon orb as part of the scheme that the highlords had engineered. 2.

— Philip

  • cboutin3 1.
  • Feal-Thas was eventually defeated when a group of adventurers, which included some of the Heroes of the Lance, entered Icewall Castle in an effort to acquire his dragon orb as part of the scheme that the highlords had engineered.
  • 2.
  • Feal-Thas was eventually defeated when a group of adventurers, including some of the Heroes of the Lance, entered Icewall Castle in an effort to acquire his dragon orb as part of the scheme that the highlords had engineered.
  • They both work: your choice.
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cboutin3 1. Feal-Thas was eventually defeated when a group of adventurers, which included some of the Heroes of the Lance, entered Icewall Castle in an effort to acquire his dragon orb as part of the scheme that the highlords had engineered. 2. Feal-Thas was eventually defeated when a group of adventurers, including some of the Heroes of the Lance, entered Icewall Castle
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