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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar

Which option is a better choice?

1. Ariakan gave Steel the chance to die in combat by allowing him to lead a company of Tarmak warriors in one of the initial waves to take the fortress.

2. Giving Steel the chance to die in combat, Ariakan allowed him to lead a company of Tarmak warriors in one of the initial waves to take the fortress.
  

Top answer

I prefer the second sentence.

  • I prefer the second sentence.
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I prefer the second sentence.
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Thanks For your help.

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