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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which option is a better choice?

1.Gerard hated to disappoint his family, so he joined the Knighthood, despite having realized on the night of his vigil before entering the military order that he felt no particular aptitude for this calling.

2. Since Gerard hated to disappoint his family, he joined the Knighthood, despite having realized on the night of his vigil before entering the military order that he felt no particular aptitude for this calling.
  

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I would choose the first one; it flows better.

  • I would choose the first one; it flows better.
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I would choose the first one; it flows better. Emotion: wink

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