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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which option is a better choice?

FYI- Szass Tam is the undead wizard/lich.
1. In the country of Thay in 1385 DR, the mighty lich Szass Tam, the zulkir of the Order of Necromancy and the pretender to the regency of Thay, met with his prisoner, Yaphyll, the zulkir of the Order of Divination, to discuss the War of the Zulkirs, the ongoing and chaotic conflict between the undead wizard and the Council of Zulkirs that began in 1375 DR.

2. In the country of Thay in 1385 DR, the mighty lich Szass Tam, the zulkir of the Order of Necromancy and the pretender to the regency of Thay, met with his prisoner, Yaphyll, the zulkir of the Order of Divination, to discuss the War of the Zulkirs. The conflict was the ongoing and chaotic war between Szass Tam and the Council of Zulkirs that began in 1375 DR.
  

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Big surprise here! I prefer the second, but the first is okay.

  • Big surprise here!
  • I prefer the second, but the first is okay.
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Big surprise here! Emotion: wink I prefer the second, but the first is okay.

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