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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Which option is a better choice?
Which option is a better choice? And are the sentences properly worded?
1. During their adventure in the giant's castle, Aoth and his three companions rescued a fire spirit named Zyl, who later took the group to the Ashenwood forest in Rashemen and introduced them to the dark fey lord known as the Stag King. Aoth convinced the Stag King to join his force of stag warriors with the band of Rashemi berserkers commanded by Vandar in an assault on the undead coalition's stronghold, the Fortress of the Half-Demon.
2. During their adventure in the giant's castle, Aoth and his three companions rescued a fire spirit named Zyl, who later took the group to the Ashenwood forest in Rashemen and introduced them to the dark fey lord known as the Stag King. Aoth convinced the Stag King to join his force of stag warriors with the band of Rashemi berserkers commanded by Vandar and assault the undead coalition's stronghold, the Fortress of the Half-Demon.
1. During their adventure in the giant's castle, Aoth and his three companions rescued a fire spirit named Zyl, who later took the group to the Ashenwood forest in Rashemen and introduced them to the dark fey lord known as the Stag King. Aoth convinced the Stag King to join his force of stag warriors with the band of Rashemi berserkers commanded by Vandar in an assault on the undead coalition's stronghold, the Fortress of the Half-Demon.
2. During their adventure in the giant's castle, Aoth and his three companions rescued a fire spirit named Zyl, who later took the group to the Ashenwood forest in Rashemen and introduced them to the dark fey lord known as the Stag King. Aoth convinced the Stag King to join his force of stag warriors with the band of Rashemi berserkers commanded by Vandar and assault the undead coalition's stronghold, the Fortress of the Half-Demon.
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#1 - In #2 "assault" almost sounds like a verb in the wrong tense, even though I eventually figured it out.
- #1 - In #2 "assault" almost sounds like a verb in the wrong tense, even though I eventually figured it out.
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#1 - In #2 "assault" almost sounds like a verb in the wrong tense, even though I eventually figured it out.
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