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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
Grammar
Which option is a better choice?
1. Sturm was the son of Angriff and Ilys Brightblade, and was born in his family’s ancestral castle on the plains of Solamnia.
2. The son of Angriff and Ilys Brightblade, Sturm was born in his family’s ancestral castle on the plains of Solamnia.
2. The son of Angriff and Ilys Brightblade, Sturm was born in his family’s ancestral castle on the plains of Solamnia.
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Sturm was the son of Angriff and Ilys Brightblade and was born in his family’s ancestral castle on the plains of Solamnia. It's generally better to have the (direct)(simple) right at the front of the sentence, unless what came just before makes starting the sentence with the parents' names the better choice. So not knowing what came before, I can't give you a definite answer.
- Sturm was the son of Angriff and Ilys Brightblade and was born in his family’s ancestral castle on the plains of Solamnia.
- It's generally better to have the (direct)(simple) right at the front of the sentence, unless what came just before makes starting the sentence with the parents' names the better choice.
- So not knowing what came before, I can't give you a definite answer.
- I see no reason for a comma in sentence 1.
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Sturm was the son of Angriff and Ilys Brightblade and was born in his family’s ancestral castle on the plains of Solamnia.It's generally better to have the (direct)(simple) right at the front of the sentence, unless what came just before makes starting the sentence with the parents' names the better choice. So not knowing what came before, I can't give you a definite answ
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