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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which option is a better choice?
1. However, a mad gnome named Gnimsh activated an enchanted device that interfered with the powerful spell that Fistandantilus was casting. This caused a huge magical explosion that destroyed Zhaman and annihilated the armies that were battling on the Plains of Dergoth.
2. However, a mad gnome named Gnimsh activated an enchanted device that interfered with the powerful spell that Fistandantilus was casting, causing a huge magical explosion that destroyed Zhaman and annihilated the armies that were battling on the Plains of Dergoth.
2. However, a mad gnome named Gnimsh activated an enchanted device that interfered with the powerful spell that Fistandantilus was casting, causing a huge magical explosion that destroyed Zhaman and annihilated the armies that were battling on the Plains of Dergoth.
Top answer
I think the divided sentence makes it more readable.
- I think the divided sentence makes it more readable.
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