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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which option is a better choice?

1. Victory had been achieved, but Laurana was deeply grieved and outraged at the loss of Sturm and by the parting words of Kitiara. However, Sturm’s sacrifice helped solidify the Knights of Solamnia into a cohesive unit.

2. Although victory had been achieved, Laurana was deeply grieved and outraged at the loss of Sturm and by the parting words of Kitiara. However, Sturm’s sacrifice helped solidify the Knights of Solamnia into a cohesive unit
  

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2! I think that beginning your sentence with although "sets a better stage" for what you want to say. Much better than a more simple but later on.

  • 2!
  • I think that beginning your sentence with although "sets a better stage" for what you want to say.
  • Much better than a more simple but later on.
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2! I think that beginning your sentence with although "sets a better stage" for what you want to say. Much better than a more simple but later on.

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