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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which option is a better choice?
1. When Forlo and his small army of soldiers marched to meet the Uigan hordes in battle at the Lost Road by the Tiderun Strait, Shedara remained in Coldhope Keep to protect his pregnant wife.
2. When Forlo and his small army of soldiers marched to the Lost Road by the Tiderun Strait to meet the Uigan hordes in battle, Shedara remained in Coldhope Keep to protect his pregnant wife.
2. When Forlo and his small army of soldiers marched to the Lost Road by the Tiderun Strait to meet the Uigan hordes in battle, Shedara remained in Coldhope Keep to protect his pregnant wife.
Top answer
Your choice. I'd use the first, giving the purpose of the march more attention than the location of the proposed battle.
- Your choice.
- I'd use the first, giving the purpose of the march more attention than the location of the proposed battle.
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Your choice. I'd use the first, giving the purpose of the march more attention than the location of the proposed battle.
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