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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which option is a better choice?

1. The attack was a complete disaster, resulting in the deaths of all the Solamnics, including Alfred MarKenin, High Justice of the Knighthood, and Derek himself.

2. The attack was a complete disaster and resulted in the deaths of all the Solamnics, including Alfred MarKenin, High Justice of the Knighthood, and Derek himself.
  

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If the second part is as important as the first part, then #2 is better because it puts both pieces of information in main clauses. Clive

— Clive

  • If the second part is as important as the first part, then #2 is better because it puts both pieces of information in main clauses.
  • Clive
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If the second part is as important as the first part, then #2 is better because it puts both pieces of information in main clauses.

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