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Cboutin3 Posted 12 years ago
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Which option is a better choice?
1. Faros Es-Kalin, Chot’s nephew, was mistaken for a servant, and he was arrested and sentenced to the mines of Vyrox, where he toiled under the whip of the cruel overseer Paug.
2. Faros Es-Kalin, Chot’s nephew, was mistaken for a servant, arrested, and sentenced to the mines of Vyrox, where he toiled under the whip of the cruel overseer Paug.
2. Faros Es-Kalin, Chot’s nephew, was mistaken for a servant, arrested, and sentenced to the mines of Vyrox, where he toiled under the whip of the cruel overseer Paug.
Top answer
#2 is better: parallel structure and less wordy.
- #2 is better: parallel structure and less wordy.
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