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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Which option is a better choice?
1. Only a day later, Kiya and the army of Hylo arrived at the camp, and despite Tylocost’s alert guards, the treasure piles underwent a reduction due to theft by the halflings.
2. Only a day later, Kiya and the army of Hylo arrived at the camp, and despite Tylocost’s alert guards, the treasure piles underwent a reduction due to the halflings stealing from them.
2. Only a day later, Kiya and the army of Hylo arrived at the camp, and despite Tylocost’s alert guards, the treasure piles underwent a reduction due to the halflings stealing from them.
Top answer
1 is consistent with passive voice. It focuses on the treasure.
- 1 is consistent with passive voice.
- It focuses on the treasure.
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