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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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1. A magical image then appeared in the sky that showed Porthios and his companions that Gilthas and the exiled elves in Khur were fighting desperately against the khurish nomad tribes.
2. A magical image then appeared in the sky that showed Porthios and his companions that Gilthas and the exiled elves in Khur were engaged in a desperate fight/battle with the khurish nomad tribes.
2. A magical image then appeared in the sky that showed Porthios and his companions that Gilthas and the exiled elves in Khur were engaged in a desperate fight/battle with the khurish nomad tribes.
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1. A magical image then appeared in the sky that showed Porthios and his companions that Gilthas and the exiled elves in Khur were fighting desperately against the Khurish nomad tribes.
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- A magical image then appeared in the sky that showed Porthios and his companions that Gilthas and the exiled elves in Khur were fighting desperately against the Khurish nomad tribes.
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1. A magical image then appeared in the sky that showed Porthios and his companions that Gilthas and the exiled elves in Khur were fighting desperately against the Khurish nomad tribes.
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Too many 'that's in a row. Restructure.
Porthios and his companions then saw a magical image in the sky that showed Gilthas and the exiled elves in Khur fighting desperately against the Khurish nomad tribes.
Porthios and his companions then saw a magical image in the sky that showed Gilthas and the exiled elves in Khur fighting desperately against the Khurish nomad tribes.
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