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Cboutin3 Posted 13 years ago
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Which option is a better choice?

1. In the years following the War of Souls, Porthios met with the Kagonesti chief Nalaryn and formed a small force of Kagonesti elves, who intended to liberate the lands of Qualinesti.

2.In the years following the War of Souls, Porthios met with the Kagonesti chief Nalaryn and formed a small force of Kagonesti elves that intended to liberate the lands of Qualinesti.
  

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My first thought is #1. However, #2 does not sound wrong. Any grammarians out there who can clarify?

  • My first thought is #1.
  • However, #2 does not sound wrong.
  • Any grammarians out there who can clarify?
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My first thought is #1. However, #2 does not sound wrong. Any grammarians out there who can clarify?

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